Monday, November 1, 2010

Alibaba ROCKS!!

We finally finished the oral presentation today! I could not describe how relieved I was when I stepped out of the classroom.:D Now let me think through this whole experience with this presentation.

1.Preparations
Based on the grade we got for proposal, we were very confident that we had great contents. We decided to follow the flow of oral discussion, so that everyone is more familiar with their own topics to cover. There were some disagreements on the use of supplementary audiovisuals. Initially, we wanted to use PowerPoint slides and some large white papers for illustrations. Then Vinod introduced to Prezi.com, which is much cooler that conventional slides. Despite the time constraints, we finally decided to give Prezi a try. I was extremely excited about this because Prezi was very new to me and it looks much more interesting that the over-used PowerPoint slides. :P

We were inspired the style of presentation by Ken Robinson, a charismatic speaker and educator. Given the nature of our project, we could not be too humorous in front of all the VIPs in our audience. But the take-away point is that the real talking is always the focus, audio-visuals are simply supplementaries. In the past, I had the tendency to make fancy slides and animations, trying to impress people. However, that distracted people and did not help getting my messages across. Yes, always keep the slides simple and to the point!

For rehearsals, our group has invested in a great amount of time and energy to make sure we handle Prezi properly. I had a programming exam to clear last Saturday, so I could not spend too much time on the preparations before that. Fortunately, my team mates were very considerate and helpful. We have devoted the entire Sunday to this presentation, going through the cycles of rehearsal several times and giving each other constructive feedbacks. I was very lucky to have team mates who really works as a team and help each other out.

2.Delivery
We designed a new setting in the classroom and divided the class into four groups, each representing one stakeholder. I believe this initiative helps audience to know exactly who they were in this scenario.

We made a point that we were not going to take scripts to the stage, although we have already written out numerous drafts of scripts.:P For me, after going through the content many times, I could somehow internalise the points and talk about it in a nature way. I was quite happy that I improved upon my monotonous tone and speak with more passion and enthusiasm. Since people are sitting in a semi-circle, I made an effort to turn around and address everyone.

In terms of the weaknesses,  I have to admit here that I forgot to mention one point about NUS Career Centre. I was supposed to say more the career workshops, but on the spot, I forgot it altogether. I found out this mistake after my presentation and was quite disappointed with myself. But thinking back, people probably did not know I missed this point because there were no bullet points, just a picture of NUS Career Centre on the screen. They did not know what I was planning to say, so they also would not notice this missing point. Therefore, the moral of the story is that it is perfectly fine to miss one or two minor points during presentation, because the audience probably do not know about it!

Other than that, I wished that I could have smiled more, talked more confidently with humour, like what Ken Robinson did for his presentations.

3.Audiovisuals
Prezi is awesome!!We found two very relevant videos to illustrate our points and add new dimensions to our presentation. Prezi forced us to minimise the words on the screen; we could no longer throw in a long paragraph and expect the audience to digest it in several seconds. For my part, since I wanted my speech to be the focus of people's attention, I simply put a few pictures to show the organisations I will talk about. That is rather effective because I believe that more people were looking at me instead of the screen which has only one picture. :D

But if we had more time, we could make the whole map more organised on Prezi. In other words, the contents on Prezi could be further improved. With the limited time we had, I believe we had tried our best. So no regrets.:)

In conclusion, I believe I have improved tremendously from the peer teaching session to this oral presentation. I wish I could present like Ken Robinson and Steve Jobs, simple, sharp and sweet. There is still a long way to go in this journey of self-improvements.

12 comments:

  1. Hi Xi Xi,

    Thanks for your detailed reflection of the oral presentation. The points you have mentioned in this blog will definitely be helpful for our group’s preparation :)

    I liked your group’s creative design of setting in the classroom and this really put us in a formal atmosphere. Your part of the presentation was very effective, with the main focus on you, not the slides. Also, you are conveying your ideas in a clear and concise manner that every one of us had no difficulty in understanding. Being steady and calm, you gave us an image of a well-knowledgeable professional and the background information was covered coherently and completely.

    All in all, I felt your presentation was effective and thanks for the hard work :D

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  2. Hey Xi Xi,

    Firstly, I would like to thank you for being a part of this group because your presence is treasured.(: I really hope that all our hard work would eventually pay off!

    For the presentation, you did very well! Calm, convincing and clear, you just had them all. Imagining myself as the audience, I believe that they would be able to fully comprehend what you were presenting. Your eye contact was good, coupled with a great posture as well. Probably, one common flaw that we all had was that we should have more facial expressions as we may probably come across as being too aggressive and unfriendly!

    But anyway, great job & cheers to the end of all the hard work! Now, let's work hard towards the finals! All the best! (:

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  3. Hi Xi Xi,

    The very first thing I notice and like about your presentation is that You have such a easy way of handling pressure, the look on face is so calm and confident. This makes your convincing abilities even better.
    Gestures and good eye contact were one of your main deliverables. Of course, you always back up what you say with solid facts. That is very promising.

    Good voice projection and creativity.

    Thanks a lot for your presentation Xi Xi. Great job with such a full proof solid proposal.

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  5. Thanks, XiXi, for this detailed reflection, and again for such a fine presentation. The highly positive feedback on this post but your presentation (and the evaluation I've already given) is testament to the great effort you have made and to the talent you have for public speaking.
    As Shivam mentions, you seem so calm and confident on stage, and you deliver so well. It is a pleasure listening to you.

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  6. Hi Nanhai,

    Thanks for the compliments. All the best!

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  7. Hi Brad,

    Thanks for the comment!

    I would not say I have a great talent for public speaking, but I am improving steadily. :P

    All the best for your future endeavours!

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  8. Hi Shivam,

    Thanks for the compliment!

    I really tried very hard to convince myself that this is not a life or death issue. It is simply a little presentation. :P

    I will try to be calm and confident for all the future obstacles!

    All the best to you! Will see you around in Engin.

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  9. Hi Alicia,

    It is a great point of you about the "unfriendly" facial expression. I guess it is because while we were thinking deeply and concentrate on the speech, we found it very hard to smile and be friendly. It is really hard to be assertive and at the same time, friendly. Nonetheless, it is worth trying!:D

    All the best!

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  10. Hi Xi Xi!

    Thanks for the many take-away points mentioned in your analysis (: Namely, the use of minimalistic slides to focus all attention onto the speaker, not relying on scripted speeches, having good eye-contact, and not having to be overly worried about missing a point or two, because the audience would be none the wiser as long as one doesn't let it show.

    I personally felt your presentation was very well-delivered. You were calm and composed, and your eye-contact was very good. The pace and tone of your voice were appropriate, likewise with your body-language. It wasn't apparent that you left out points during your speech, which just goes to show how well (and confidently) you delivered your material.

    Kudos on a job well done! (:

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  11. Hi Xi Xi,

    If I were to pick your best quality during your presentation, it would be your calm attitude. I honestly feel that among our group, you stand out as someone who is professional in communication.

    $W?h0w$

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  12. Hi Hi Xi Xi (no pun intended..), you need not be so hard on yourself, as I feel you have done pretty well, and improved much more from last time. In fact, you spoke with greater clarity that last time, which made your presentation more effective. Also, don't feel bad about missing a point, as we won't know the mistake if we don't know what's missing. I think with your calm and cool attitude like what Wyhow said, it makes you a good presenter.

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